BackwardsHat

Tips, comments, and constructive criticism please.
Any help is appreciated.
Also, if anyone knows where to get better VSTs and synths, that information would be helpful too =)
I still have the flp so the slightest suggestion for improvement would be great.

Any tips or ideas would be great! I'm aiming for more of a reggaeton song with techno influences, any advice and constructive criticism is welcome.

Does anyone here use sibelius or have previously used sibelius for songwriting? Would you consider it a good program or are similar freeware programs just as good?

This is a collab project that my friend and I have been working on. We're looking for any tips and advice for the final version. =)

Any comments, criticism, and advice is welcome. Even tell me if there is a tiny detail that should be changed, and I'll go back and change it. This is more of the rough draft, and the final will have vocals in it along with any of the advice given by all of you =D